Final Edit | The Robbery

Point 40. This is our final edit, things which our teacher picked up on and told us to change, have been changed.


Evaluation Task 5 – Tags

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These are the tags which are on our YouTube film. They explain what attracts a film noir audience to our film, how our film relates to a ‘real’ film noir movie. We did this together.

Evaluation Task 8 – Feedback


These are the pieces of feed back my peers gave me. I used Snapchat and Facebook Messenger to share my video and ask for the things they liked and disliked about my film. Most of it is the same thing which solidifies the things which needs changing and the things which are good.

Task 1 Evaluation

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These are the different shots of the title, setting, characters, special FX etc. I used pages on the mac to make it, i just made a table to fill in. I screenshotted photos of my film then inserted them into the table.

The Robbery | Second Edit

Point 39. We travelled to Elgin to film our movie. Using feedback we are going to remove the scene with Jamie’s sister and correct the alley way POV shot. We used a Canon G7X to film. Jamie and I are the actors.

Jamie – Hero

James – Villain